I’m sure that you’ve probably seen at least
one person getting bullied online, at school, or other places before, or maybe
you’ve seen it but didn’t know it was part of bullying. Some people think that
bullying is not a very big issue and that it’s just a happening between
friends, but there are a whole lot of serious problems behind it. More than 90%
of students in Canada think that bullying is a serious problem. Also, 65% of
them feel that bullying should be a crime. Bullying is happening everywhere and
could happen anytime and bullies are getting away with punishments and they are
not getting what they deserve today. There are many reasons why bullying should
be a crime and why the bullies should get punished!
Bullying is an act of repeated aggressive behavior in order to
intentionally hurt another person, physically or mentally. There are many different types of bullying. Not
all bullying necessarily involve physical touch. There is physical, verbal,
indirect bullying, social alienation, intimidation and cyber-bullying. Physical
bullying is straight forward. It’s when physical harm is involved. Verbal
bullying is name-calling, making offensive remarks, and so on, indirect is when
they spread rumours or stories about someone, and social alienation is when a
bully excludes someone from a group on purpose. Also, intimidation is when a
bully threatens someone else and last but not least, cyber-bullying is done by
using technology such as phones, computers, the internet and more. These 6
types of bullying are happening everywhere which means that a lot of people are
getting harmed and affected by them.
Bullying
began in September 2007 when a grade 9 student at a high school in Cambridge,
N.S was bullied by the grade 12’s because he was wearing a pink shirt. That is
the reason why “Pink Shirt Day” was formed and people started to go against bullying all around the world and helped and encouraged those who were getting
hurt. Bullies out there might not know
how it feels to be bullied but it affects the people who get bullied on
greatly! Many victims commit suicide, get seriously injured, or get mental
problems after. It has been found by a doctor that the daily stress of getting
bullied can lead into long-term damage to people’s body. People who are
stressing out or threatened, usually tends to be alert for a long period of
time which makes their heart speed up, their muscles tense, their blood vessels
narrow, and also it makes their digestive system slow down. Tense muscles could
become painful and their stomachs could start to ache at the same time. Also,
stress could lead to getting weaker immune systems which means that they’d get
sick easier. Bullied students mostly feel lonely, depressed, low self-esteemed,
and also get physical ills like headaches, nausea, and so on. These symptoms
could lead them to commit suicide because they don’t see the point of living
anymore since they are depressed all the time. Many lose confidence and
have problems with other people as they get older. They become more careful
with others and are not able to make many good friends.
Even
though the bullies make others have lots of problems and issues, it’s hard to
believe but they do NOT get punished at all for their act. Many victims get
hurt physically and mentally and also commit suicide because the bullies make
their lives feel pointless. How could people who lead others to feel
miserable not get what they deserve? Since technology is so developed these
days, cyber-bullying is starting to increase and the internet is turning into a
main problem. People gossip and talk bad things about other people on social
network such as Twitter, Facebook, MySpace. There isn’t a certain law that says
that bullying is a crime yet, but many people (65% of respondents) are
requesting for them to create a law which would punish the bullies. Even though it’s not robbery or direct murder,
bullying would be still considered as murder because it destroys other people’s
lives. Many people are too scared to call for help because they think that the
bullies will do something even worse to them after. Some of the positive things if bullying gets considered as a crime is that, the bullies will get what they deserve and feel the pain too by recieving punishment. Also, the victims won't be scared or afraid to tell an adult or someone for help because they'd know that the bullies won't be able to hurt them again and the victims will be able to go to school without stressing or having to be alert all the time. Lastly, if other students see what happens to bullies if they get caught or reported, the bullying issue will decrease greatly and there won't be as many people who dare to try harm others!
Bullying
is part of a crime and bullies should get criminal records for them so it
affects their future lives. They’ll receive a criminal record and universities
and companies will know if they have done anything bad in the past. The fact
that they bullied others before would be very important because they will be
able to know if the person’s responsible for their actions and is able to work
well with others without causing any trouble. The bullies will also feel very
guilty and it’d teach them a huge lesson. Bullying is a crime because it’s the
exact same case as a murder in a way because it leads people to have an
awful life and even lead to commiting suicide for some. Hopefully, one day bullying will
be compromised as a crime and will be able to make the bullies feel the same
way as how the victims felt!
~ BULLYING STOPS HERE! ~
Sources I used:
- http://news.nationalpost.com/2012/02/29/even-non-violent-bullying-should-be-a-crime-canadians-tell-poll/
- http://www.fortmcmurraytoday.com/ArticleDisplay.aspx?e=3487269

Nice job Alice, right on time and with 3 minutes to spare! This is a very informative post, and I learned a lot of new things while reading it. I didn't realize that there are SIX different types of bullying-- wow!
ReplyDeleteThere are so many stories in the news nowadays about bullies and anti-bullying; I feel as if people are starting to become aware of how much bullying can really affect someone's life.
However, I don't believe that bullying actually start in September, 2007. Sure, that's when people started to try even harder to prevent bullying, but bullying has been going on since the beginning of time! Maybe you could have just rephrased your words a little bit? But it was a good idea to mention the pink shirt incident because now "ANTI-BULLYING" day has spread throughout the world.
This was very well written, and I could onyl find minor mistakes. Such as grammar and run-on sentences. I found there were some sentences that were really long, and you could have made them into even 3 or 4 different sentences.
Other than that, I have always been very against bullying, and I learned a lot from this post. This is a great post to end your humanities grade 8 blogging experiance!
Terrific! Alice does it again! This was a great post! I didn't find a lot of grammar or spelling mistakes. You could've broken some of your paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteI also agree with Olivia! I don't think bullying started in September 2007. There was lots of people being bullied before that and maybe way back in the day ;) ..Mean Girls???? Good effort!
Thank you girls for commenting on my post! (: Yes, I know that bullying didn't start in 2007. It's just when the whole issue became more public than before. I'm sure bullying started a long time ago! (:
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